Write With Me! Study Hall, Monday, July 20, 2015

  What’s blooming in your writing today? I’m still expanding scenes with Ruth in The Man Who Loved Chocolate. Please leave a post below about what you’re working on today. Write like it’s your birthday and every word is a gift! 

11 responses to “Write With Me! Study Hall, Monday, July 20, 2015”

  1. still on hiatus after ulnar nerve surgery last week–hungover from anesthesia and codeine. Randi?? Who’s that?!! Expect to be out of fog by next week; see you all then.


  2. I realized my current book is a cross between a travelogue and some very light history. This morning I tried to bleed onto the keyboard and add something to make it count. I wrote for four hours but didn’t succeed. I have to either raise the stakes or learn to be funnier or I won’t have a book worth reading.


    • Sounds like you lost track of your passion for the subject, maybe? What made you want to write this book in the first place? Who is it for? How did this place make you feel? Have you told us how it smelled, tasted, looked, sounded, felt to be there? Why did you go, and what did you find there? I’m curious. You are a very funny guy, but if you make us feel anything on each page, you will succeed. Nothing wrong with a travelogue, especially if it gives us an experience we wouldn’t have had otherwise. You’ll find the heart, I know.


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